Please find the attachment below
Content: 2 Pages – 875 words
If possible, try to cut it down to around 800 words while maintaining same context and meaning.
Here what I am looking for,
1.) Strong opening and closing sentences for each paragraph in the essay.
2.) Total content should be in an active voice, positive and confident tone.
3.) Re-construct the sentence structure, if needed. Should maintain a connection to each sentence and each paragraph.
4.) Content should be error-free (No Grammatical and Punctuation errors)
5.) Strong Vocabulary is needed. Avoid high complex words and sentences.
6.) Content should be easily understood to read without any difficulties.