– Implementation and Evaluation. You need to take this wordy and grammatically flawed slide and rework it. Be clear, be concise, Who, What, When, How. You have several disciplines including operations, marketing, franchise ownership, training and human resources which will need to be involved. Tell me their roles quickly. An example would be:
“The marketing department must develop and implement a comprehensive plan to support these strategic plans. They must quarterly provide an analysis of the results of their plan and its role in achieving the stated objectives.”
– Conclusion. I have no idea what you are saying on this slide. All you need to do is clearly state your proposed strategies and then open it to Q&A.