Final revise for this essay for my portfolio.
Since our campus offers Molecular Biology class, I changed the course to applied molecular techniques class. Did add some more information of what we actually do in the course (learning on demand techniques in many different biology fields) and used your work as much as I could.
“In an essay of 800 words argue for the addition or deletion of a required class for your major (e.g., not general education requirements and so on). To support your argument, use two relevant sources, such as your department’s website/handbook, academic or professional journals, or articles from one of the newspapers noted in WP2. Keep in mind that you will enhance or detract from your own ethos based upon the sources you choose. You might find it useful to consider what sources will help you best support your claim–your thesis. Would a journal article, for example, best help you, or would a course catalog from another university best support your claim? You will need a works cited (MLA) or references (APA) page for this paper. If you are unsure about a source, please check with me. You may not use Wikipedia or equivalent sources for this essay.
This is a thesis driven essay. I encourage you to use a “because clause” for your provisional thesis because doing so will help you use a claim and reason in your thesis. Be sure to explain and support your reasons while also giving details about the class you would add or delete so that a reader outside your discipline will understand what the class is about and how it relates to the major. It is important to remember that you are not making an argument only about what would be best for you. Your argument is about what would best serve the students in your major in terms of deleting or adding a required major course. “